Each one of us lives in a false world, with a fake smile carefully placed on our faces. The ‘good’ we portray is not always the real good. Its wrapped in selfishness at times. But however, sometimes we fight this devil inside of us – at times we win, at times we gotta accept our defeat. We are mightier than this is, yet we fail to accept our strength. We are better, and there’s always room for more. The beast in me, the beast in you – is something we better kill. And if not kill , better cage it in..
Beneath every layer, of this fleshy mass,
Hides a latent beast.
Who revives and rises on a single click,
has innocence as its feast.
The beast is in there,
Let it be asleep..
Coz once it awakens,
It gets darker and deep.
Strange it is how, our feeble soul,
Holds it captive in a thumping heart.
Strange it is how, such conflicting instincts
Breathe in one body, and are not apart.
Peace one gets, with commendable control.
The latter just breaks the rules,
The boundaries, the fence, the ethics and all,
By Diving in sinister pools.
beautiful poem with nice theme! 🙂
Aww look whose here! Thanks Mahmud! (:
True words. How easy for all of us to become fakes. So much so, that sometimes it is hard for your own self to figure out the true you!
Beautifully written!
Indeed it is, we get so habitual of the plastic feelings that cant get the real ones at times,
glad you liked it! (:
true,
we do smile for real at times,
be true to yourself..Happy Sunday.
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welcome back to poets rally.
you rock….
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Glad to be back Ji!
Thank you so much! God bless you for all the efforts you put in! (:
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*smiles*
Don’t we struggle with this all the time? Its something incorporated within you and constantly reminds that no matter how much you self fashion yourself to be accepted in a ‘society’, the reality is that we are still animals somewhere in the depth of our existence.
Ah thats a struggle which never ends! No matter how social we get, we still are animals.
Bacha & His Sweet Words Yet Again Bring Smiles To Bhai’s Face 🙂
Eeee 😀
Pleasure is all mine bhai!
Beautifully written….
Thanks Reggie! (:
love that last line, great rally piece
Thanks a bunch! (:
“Strange it is how, such conflicting instincts
Breathe in one body”
So very true! Humans are complex creatures. Your poem does a lovely job of expressing that we all have a dark side.
And the darker side is better kept aside.
Thank you for the praise! (:
Through Tazkia-e-Nafs we can tame our lower self which you are calling a beast. This is the point where religion has a role to play. The people of true faith never submit to their lower selves.
Seconded. (:
Thank you! *smiles*
I agree with Bushra Afzal.
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for deep the devil may sleep, a slightest touch can awaken.. yet while he sleeps, the angel on my left shoulder can strengthen my will to fight too I think.. lovely thoughts, made even more beautiful by ur explanations.. thank u for sharing 🙂
Here’s My Poem For Poets Rally
Glad you liked it, I love your about me section!
And your triolets too! 😀
The true self is what counts!
Poem on!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/when-will-i-know/
Exactly! (:
Happy Rally! (:
some much thought in this…wonderful piece….good and evil are two faces of us…just the balance between the two differs from person to person…some remain strong , some stray…
And thats what paints the black in white in our lives, and in others too.
Glad you liked it! (:
o my! what a scary picture you painted…yes we do not know the power of that beast till it rears its head but we do know our own power for holding it back so long 🙂
Enjoy the rally!
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And the power to hold it back is mightier than the beast itself.
Happy rally!
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Yes indeed!!
There is always one inside us.. Here’s what I wrote sometime back..
Beautiful Faces
You’ll see how similar our thought pattern is.. Hugs xx
Just read Beautiful faces and the gestures hidden beneath them, thanks for sharing Olivia! (:
‘Strange it is how, our feeble soul, Holds it captive in a thumping heart’ … I love those lines, and I love your poem. It captures the ongoing wrestle between that which we ought to do and that which we choose to do. At least, as I seem to keep saying, this is what I take from it. Brilliant. 🙂
Thanks so much for all your lovely comments here! (:
ah, what an interesting paradox, isn’t it? What exactly do we do with that creature lurking underneath? It’s such a cool theme to explore and you did an awesome job with it.
Indeed it is, what to do with it? Just prove yourself superior to it, and then n there its gonna give up! (:
Glad you liked the theme, I was abboutt to change it! 😉
love the lyric. thank you.
Thanks much (:
One word: brilliant =)
Two words: Thank you!
very well written analysis of self-great poem
Thanks Anju! Your feedback is much appreciated. 🙂